The only thing I would change is that the deaths are not "due to government policy", but rather "due to compliance with government policy". I know it's a tough situation, and people in places like Australia don't even have proper arms to defend themselves, but everybody has to make a choice when this kind of shit goes down.

The only thing I would change is that the deaths are not "due to government policy", but rather "due to population compliance with government policy". I know it's a tough situation, and people in places like Australia don't even have proper arms to defend themselves, but everybody has to make a choice when this kind of shit goes down.